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Timeless Muse's avatar

Thanks for the little reminders.

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Wildwood Writer's avatar

I like its hunger for life, the way it keeps daring the reader to reach out and touch joy. But it could breathe more if it cut some of the repetition—the endless “why nots” weigh it down when the fire is already there.

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